{"id":286,"date":"2009-06-06T23:18:27","date_gmt":"2009-06-07T04:18:27","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.rickneal.ca\/?p=286"},"modified":"2009-06-06T23:19:23","modified_gmt":"2009-06-07T04:19:23","slug":"story-day-two","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.rickneal.ca\/?p=286","title":{"rendered":"STORY &#8211; Day Two"},"content":{"rendered":"<p> 
 Another very full day, and my head is buzzing.<\/p>\n<p>The group seems to be relaxing a little more in the seminars; there&#8217;s more response to Mr. McKee&#8217;s jokes and questions, a little more conversation among attendees at the breaks, and just generally a looser feeling.<\/p>\n<p>The subject matter is tightening up, though, getting into more specifics of the craft of building stories. Three-act structure, building mystery and suspense and dramatic irony, the principle of antagonism, handling exposition, stuff like that.<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t know how the man does it. My energy is flagging by the end of the day, and all I&#8217;m doing is sitting, listening, and taking notes*. He&#8217;s lecturing the entire time I&#8217;m sitting in the seats, and he&#8217;s still lively and energetic and interesting at the end of the day. A testimony to his stamina and the passion he has for the subject**.<\/p>\n<p>The passion&#8217;s contagious. I&#8217;ve got a number of new ideas for my writing projects from the seminar, and I&#8217;m so eager to use them that I spent last evening, and plan to spend this evening, putting some of what I&#8217;ve learned into practice.<\/p>\n<p>A friend of mine once told me that he tries to pick the moment in a seminar or session when he&#8217;s got his money&#8217;s worth. Sometimes it comes early, sometimes it comes late, and sometimes it doesn&#8217;t come at all. It&#8217;s a way to evaluate, on the fly, how much value the seminar has for you.<\/p>\n<p>My moment came today, during the afternoon, when it finally clicked for me why the novel and a half that I&#8217;ve written so far weren&#8217;t working the way I wanted them to. I know how to fix it, too. I&#8217;m just not sure it&#8217;s worth the time to go back to that when I have a couple new ideas that I could start fresh with, and avoid those mistakes.<\/p>\n<p>Anyway, one day to go, and half of that is going to be watching <em>Casablanca<\/em>, which I&#8217;m really looking forward to. Seeing all the pieces laid out on the workbench is no substitute for seeing how it all fits together in a working movie.<\/p>\n<p>\u00c2\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00c2\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>*Not as many notes as I had feared; I&#8217;ve got the book, and that covers a bunch of stuff. And a lot of the lecture is paraphrasing basic principles to make sure the point sinks home. And there are a lot of examples to illuminate the principles, and stories to keep everyone&#8217;s interest up.\u00c2\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>\u00c2\u00a0<\/p>\n<p>**I&#8217;ve used the word &#8220;passion&#8221; a coupe of times talking about Robert Mckee. Maybe it sounds melodramatic, but that&#8217;s one of is defining characteristics, at least during the seminar.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Another very full day, and my head is buzzing. The group seems to be relaxing a little more in the seminars; there&#8217;s more response to Mr. McKee&#8217;s jokes and questions, a little more conversation among attendees at the breaks, and just generally a looser feeling. 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